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Inspired by Doctor Who's "Turn Left:" Pick one of my stories and tell me a point in the tale that you'd change -- something tiny or big -- and I'll tell you how that one difference would have altered the course of the entire story.

Date: 2013-05-07 05:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shihadchick.livejournal.com
Ooh, interesting.

How would the sex magic Duncs/Seabs story have changed if someone else had walked in partway through their ~preparation?

(I AM REAL BAD AT THIS GAME, SORRY.)

Date: 2013-05-09 03:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angelsaves.livejournal.com
...There's a knock on the door while he's carrying them back over to the dresser.

It's Sharpy. He takes a moment to stare at the two of them, covered in purple lipstick, and then comes inside and slams the door behind himself. "Explain," he says.

Duncs glances back at Seabs, who's doing his best deer-in-the-headlights impression. "Um," he says. "Sex magic?"

Sharpy narrows his eyes. "Okay, that makes sense. I'm in."

"You're in," Duncs repeats.

"Well, we have to do something about this slump," Sharpy says reasonably. "And sex magic probably gets stronger the more people are involved, right?"

"Right," Seabs says. Duncs shoots him a look, but he just shrugs and grins.

"So," Sharpy says. "You up for a threesome?"

"Why the hell not?" Duncs hands his cup of wine to him. "Here, start with this."

"I'll start drawing on him," Seabs volunteers.

Sharpy knocks back the wine and puts the cup down firmly on the dresser, then strips off his shirt. God, he really is unfairly handsome. "Go for it," he says.

Duncs stands back while Seabs draws on Sharpy for a little while, then says, "My turn," and steals the lipstick. Seabs makes a whiny noise. "Gotta share the wealth," Duncs says unrepentantly.

"Oh, is that how it is," Seabs says, and laughs. "Two can play at that game, my friend."

A shudder ripples through Sharpy's pecs under Duncs' hands. He looks up, and -- unsurprisingly -- they're kissing. He stops drawing for a moment to watch, just enjoying the way Seabs is cupping Sharpy's face in his hands, and how Sharpy is straining towards him and trying not to move at the same time.

He adds another spiral, then caps the lipstick and says, "Okay, boys, go ahead and smudge it."

Seabs doesn't need to be told twice -- he moves one hand to the small of Sharpy's back and hauls him in close, all without breaking the kiss.

"Damn," Duncs says, impressed in spite of himself. "Don't forget to breathe."

"Shut up and come here," Seabs says, so Duncs does. He decides that nibbling Sharpy's neck is a really good idea, so he does that too.

"Not bad," Sharpy says, and nudges Duncs' chin up. Duncs takes the hint and kisses him on the mouth. It's sort of weird, but also awesome, to know that Sharpy's lips are all swollen and wet from Seabs, like they're sharing.

"Too much pants," Seabs mumbles, and Duncs feels him fumbling at his belt buckle. He gets it after a moment, and suddenly Duncs feels cool air on his junk.

"Hey, hey," he stops making out with Sharpy to say. "Don't want to scare the new guy."

Sharpy just laughs at that. "New guy? I've forgotten more about dick than you two losers know combined." He shrugs Duncs' arm off his shoulder and drops to his knees.

"Feel free to demonstrate," Duncs says shakily.

"That was the plan," Sharpy says. He looks up at Duncs, winks, and adds, "Anything for the team, right?"

Date: 2013-05-15 09:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shihadchick.livejournal.com
oh my god, this is SO GREAT

so, true story, i had to shriek mentally and backbutton out of my email when I first tried to read this because someone walked in and started looking over my shoulder (OKAY so I was at work but NOT THE POINT) and now I got to really roll around gleefully in how AWESOME this is. FOR THE GOOD OF THE TEAM!!!! Sharpy being totally up for a threesome! Sharpy claiming to have forgotten more about dick than they'll ever know!! (Oh god now I'm thinking about babby Sharpy having threesomes with babby Carts and Richie before any of them got even remotely attractive and um, DISTRACTED.)

ANYWAY THIS WAS GREAT, YOU'RE THE BEST, YOUR STORIES FOREVERRRRRRR. <3333

Date: 2013-05-15 10:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angelsaves.livejournal.com
ahhhh i'm so glad you liked it! and omg the idea of that awkward babby threesome *____*

iluuuuuu <333333

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